If you see a problem, you can often go back and edit your design before submitting it
This deck is as close to representing the player character as we could possibly ask for in Universes Beyond: Fallout
It managed to Top 8 GP Melbourne in March, in the hands of Jason Chung, as a rogue brew designed to fight against the Eldrazi menace (the Top 8 of GP Melbourne was incredibly weird, featuring Zombie Infestation Dredge, three copies of Eldrazi, and three copies of Living End to go with one Chord of Calling deck)
Sauron, the Lord of the Rings captures the character's flavor in many ways, as its impressive name would suggest, from the Ring's temptation to a 5/5 Orc Army token to Sauron's ability to raise something from the dead to fight again
Definitely Commander playable, and maybe playable in Modern, drawing three cards for two mana is absolutely insane
That's the most common archetype in Commander according to EDHREC.com Control - Need a win con that can kill faster with toxic in a control deck in your land base